I have taken the semi chibi character from before and began to fix him up a little and work out how he is going to work.
I started off simply mapping him out just to get a better understanding of him and to work out where any faults may be.
I used an invert to slowly start working into him.
Here I started to work out the kinks like the arms and shoulders.
I then fully silhouetted him to see what he looked like. Not to bad I think. I tried adding some highlights to details and to brake him up a little. I think he works well though a little more refinery is needed.
Here Im just comparing the original to the new silhouette.